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Can't Wait(To Eat You)

08:09 May 27 2009
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I can't help but to be addicted to this

Your flesh brings me to a state of bliss

Carve off your face to make a new mask

Use you blood to refill my flask

Male or female it matters not to me

Just as long as I'm setting your soul free

Humanity would be such a waste

A waste if your flesh I were unable to taste

I was born in this mind's state

So I'll always keep a full plate

Wash my hands in a blood filled bowl

I'm always looking for a new soul



All I can think about as I lay you to rest

Is how I would love to taste your flesh

Said I can't wait no I can't wait to eat you

There's nothing else right now that I'd wish to do

So yeah I've got my fork and knife

There's no better taste than a freshly taken life



An alchoholic canibal forever I'll be stuck in my ways

Nobody will be safe thruoghout the rest of my days

Listening as to their god they scream plead and shout

Yet as usual there's no one here to help them out

Right before I lay them on their final bed

I let them know that their god is dead

There is no help left for them here

Let them drop one more final tear

Lie and tell them that they'll be ok

Grab my knife and then go about my day



All I can think about as I lay you to rest

Is how I would love to taste your flesh

Said I can't wait no I can't wait to eat you

There's nothing else right now that I'd wish to do

So yeah I've got my fork and knife

There's no better taste than a freshly taken life



I could blame it on the devil but it'd be a lie

You'd understand too if the flesh of another you'd try

Just grab your personal tool and let a soul fly

Slit the throat of your prey as you look them in the eye

Let them know that they will become a part of you

Tell them that there's nothing they can do

If it's your first u can't let them get to your conciance

So you'll have to cook them unconcious

A louisville slugger is all you'll need

Beat'em repeatedly to tenderize the meat

Smoke some weed to prepare for your meal

For with a glass of blood their soul is ready for you to steal



All I can think about as I lay you to rest

Is how I would love to taste your flesh

Said I can't wait no I can't wait to eat you

There's nothing else right now that I'd wish to do

So yeah I've got my fork and knife

There's no better taste than a freshly taken life x2


COMMENTS

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lestatscountess
lestatscountess
10:09 May 27 2009

i love it





TangledBrokenNerve
TangledBrokenNerve
18:22 Jun 06 2009

Where do i hand in my application ? :)





VampiressMercury
VampiressMercury
15:10 Jun 20 2009

Hmm this one is very interesting...but i love it!! I love your poems period! You should teach me how to write poetry but it was never my thing in english O.o lol





sculptarexdexfrumuse
sculptarexdexfrumuse
23:59 Jul 02 2009

This caught my eye. Perfect writing of a dark scene, and the characters are really well made and authentic. You definitely have a way with words. Beautiful description on feelings. I really loved this...The way you wrote is beautiful, the words on how you spoke. I felt was rich and intreging.



I absolutely adore this line: "For with a glass of blood their soul is ready for you to steal"



Writing is always an outlet for emotions, and what you have is a great start for a story.



Congratulations again, amazing work!








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